Friday, 15 February 2013

my senses in the pool

In the pool you can see people splashing in front of you “splash,splash”. I can hear the people screaming. I can smell  the chlorine. I can hear the people in the water “ yahoo”. I hear you say.I can taste the water coming into my mouth”yack,yack”. I hopped into the pool and the pool was really warm. First thing I did was freestyle  and backstroke and I learnt to do freestyle better and backstroke better too.The second thing I learnt how to do the starfish on my back and it was fun to me but i don't know if  anyone also had fun but I think they did and we went  went back to class.

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  1. I am glad you are having fun swimming, Nikitah!

    You use your senses well to describe what it is like in the pool!

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  2. Kia ora Nikitah, it was great to see you yesterday and hear about how busy you are with
    Mr Moriarty. When you wrote about the chlorine it made me think about my swimming lessons that I had when I was little. The pool was indoor and heavily chlorinated, I didn't like it. We are lucky Mr Gifkins takes such good care of our pool. See you again soon. Mrs Miller

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  3. Hi Nikitah...I just wrote a message to you but something funny happened, so I don't know if you will get my first message or not. Your art work has very funky colours! See you again soon.

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    1. thank you mrs miller

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