Moment in time.
I saw the water splashing.
I saw the leaves floating.
I heard the splashing water
I heard people yelling.
I felt the cold water crashing on me.
I felt scared to jump off.
I wondered if it was going to hurt.
I wondered if it was scary.
This is my moment in time writing and I liked doing it.
Great job I liked all the descriptive words you put in there. Keep up the good work!
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